Hello everyone in the
[TG is a name. Drop "the"] TG ..
To be honest.. Before 9 months or more , I was hating
[I hated ] the English
[ the English=British people. You better say English people to make your writing clear] and I fool
[fooled. it occurred in the past] my self and said :
" Why Should I learn the كفار Language "
" meh, the worst language lecture is coming " ...
Then, I thought : Don't be stupid, Salman!
English it's
[is. Drop this pronoun here] a great language , you should push yourself to learn it..
Don't allow yourself to feel bored ..
You want to be careful in the University? Then you must learn the " universe
[universal. Use an adjective before a noun] language " ..
So, I decided to take a self-course on english .. But I think
[ thought. Remember, you are in the past ] : "O Salman, u r the first one know you will leavs
[ leave. Do not use the third person singular here! ] this challenge, and you know why ! "
This sentence does not make any sense. Be clear. You should say "You are going to be the first one to leave this challenge"
" hmmmmmm "
" Why you didn't try
[why don't you try] a
fun [ funny. use an adjective here. It could be funnier too ] way to learn ? "
" F.. Fun
[the same mistake above] way ? "
" yah man .. Why don't you play some video games and learn from it
[them] .. Just do it! "
Thank goodness
[Do not use it. Just write God with a capital letter] .. It's a good idea !
@ExtraMHD recommend
[Recommended me] me to play Ace Attorney Trilogy .. It was a great advice if you think about it ..
Ace Attorney :
[ Use an article here. A] Visual Novel
[ Better add game here ], Depends on "Understand
[ing] the
[a] story" .. and .. It's a game .. Video game !!
I started a seriously
[serious] learning before 4 months .. I push
[pushed] myself to foucs with my teacher and play some " Ace Attorney " on night after School and حلقة
After that, form the man can't
[could not] imagine himself speaking on
[drop it] English, to the one who sad
[better use " not satisfied] if the English lecture near to End ..
I hope if I can a great in English .. I know I'm too bad on English : Vocabulary,
listing,reading and writing
* I got ≈ 5000 points in VocabExam .. LOL *
I'll be better than everyday .. Insha'allah ♥
Thank you for reading
هممف .. تعبت @@